[messenger]

okay this is ur shot after this battle i dont want u runing ur mouth or laying bars over any of my shit again,

The Rules.

rule 1
50 bars ( that dosnt mean write ur shit out in one confusing block like u normarly do, it means 50 lines no more no less,)

rule 2
best of 3 votes wins. ( voting will be for rhyming talent vocab and diversity ). Mods or an Admin will vote in the event of a tie

rule 3
all insults remain personel either directed to me or u, no mothers familys or girlfriends brought into it.

rule 4
ur the challenger so u lay first.

This post has been edited by messenger: 21 November 2009 - 12:57 PM

[daniels]

wat is this mine and ur batle yh bruv ???????

[messenger]

daniels, on Nov 19 2009, 06:02 AM, said:

wat is this mine and ur batle yh bruv ???????

yeah. this is how u should of went about battling, not laying bars over previous battles.

[daniels]

dont even waste my time u ant even prepared them rhymes be4 u evern start spitin them lines times up i shud shoot u right inbtween the eyes u told me a lie u sed u can spit bars and rhymes me and my boys run the grime scene im to big for this scene ur cmin at me like runy beans youve no ive already won this dont u its daniels im cmin at u like swine flu im jst ganna sweep right bye u 1st il tell u how i run my crew then ill tell u how im ganna run u so fuck you!! but every one noes they cant stop me they need me im like a muny tree muny here muny there fuck it my monys every were you wanna gun fuck it ur probly shoot ya self in the phum cus ur so fucking dum bruv this ant no sweet ting u look up to the page its beatking this ant no lil fling soon ill be the beat fucking king im like jackie chan u throw a punch at me ill brake ya arm fam dont try put on the charm ill stick the scorching borer in ya arm then ill ring the muther fucking alarm be 4 go il slap u wid the side of my parm hers my numb 075 shit u ant even ganna be alive your bar ant even on the survive so give me five fuck u you ant even ganna be alive you a dead man walkin bruv u ant ganna beat me u might aswell well delete me u keepin cmin at me wid them shit lines i keep cming at u wid the badist rhymes theres to many of us dieing bruv y the fuck u crying ill leave ur braine in a mes i dont give a fuck im noan by the press c i chat the facts u chat wack ill stab u in the back wat bruv u want some crack fuck u cus im back wiid this badist track
your just like a dove to much in love im like a black bird no love but i kil that fucking dove bruv im from up above ive got the golden glove i ant never ganna die im to flie i got to many eyes for u fucking flies gota go bruv peps wanna lsiten to my bars im the muther fucking star uve pushed me to far you on my to do list trust bruv u ant ganna get thru dis look down my gun your wastid youve just bin done your so dum u wud been alive if u didnt get on a hype

[messenger]

Say hello to the future of music,
Goodbye to the deluded, disillusioned and stupid,
You did not wanna meddle with me,
Cause being mellow just isn’t me,
Say hi to the fellow that delivers rap simplicity.
Lyrically swallow a punch,
As I follow a hunch,
Cause tomorrow for lunch, im eating the alphabet from A to Z,
But ill start with j and b, and end with k and c,
Keep up your jealousy, hope u enjoy hating me,
But you’ll never have what it takes to be,
King of this rapping,
You been waiting a thousand years for it to happen,
But your acting, so play your role, stick to plot,
But my scenes up next called the bitch got shot,
And this is not a tit for tat spit,
This is the nail in the coffin of a shit spitting bitch,
And u aint stopping this, im ever lasting.
And this is the clever crafting, of a word professor,
The words and the wisdom I give them, each verse gets better,
The letters I shred together will leave u dreading sleep like u was heath ledger,
My verses explode as I expose the next hoe to get choked,
Leave u wit a broken nose, in a comatose from a verbal overdose,
Battles over closed,
Cause your throwing blows, that are too weak to touch me,
It must be ugly living life as a wanna be thug g,
Messenger vs. Daniels,
Shit it’s a lesson for ya can u handle,
The essence of hip hop,
Is the messenger and that’s its stop,
This is not a battle that’s even, so heres your answer
Ur a pussy and im destroying u like cervical cancer,
U can barely put a sentence together,
U barely make sense so im sentencing get a, home tutor to help ya, With your dyslexia,

Im gonna get dude as in cool to put the tools to work,
And add a new section in the site for girls,
So u can keep your bitch spits to your self, occasionally ill pop in and rewrite your rhymes myself
Just to give u some help,
In your verse u say u run the grime scene,
If that’s the case the future of grime music is frightening,
Ur writing, is quite dim, u might bring the typical content,
But your lyrics aint honest, your full of shit,
I’m sick of fucking schooling pricks,
And this is bar 44 but I don’t give a fuck ill keep spiting 40 more,
I don’t need to write half then take a break for a day,
I aint that way, freestyle means freestyle players play,
U aint hardcore, u aint even hard your a whore,
U started a war, knowing youde loose why the fuck did u choose to start it for,
So say hello to the future of music,
And goodbye to the deluded, disillusioned and stupid,

Let the voting commence,

This post has been edited by messenger: 21 November 2009 - 12:57 PM

[DudeAsInCool]

Messenger takes this one. Daniels warmin' up for a rematch

[daniels]

Why do u use words u dont even mean
Think ur a topman dont rep 4 da scene
I got a few thing to say first of all
Dont use lyrics that r personal
Second of all u dont get gash
So stop tlkin about havin a bash
Ur barz might be fit for the king of the gutters
Better walk out the scene coz u just stutter
If u want 2 speak put ur hand up
In hyde park i prefer to stand up
Cant test me or else u'll get hurt
I'll make u sit down in the dirt
Ur Like disbale ur forest gump
Shut ur mouth u'll get blown liek a pump
u fink ur gud but ur not that nice
ill heat u up like herbs n spice
i heard u went 2 ur manz 4 advice
nex time ill follow u like a trackin device bruv i didnt say i was nice u step up to me im ganna roll u around like a dice u wont even tink bout tryin it twice ill come to ya yard thru ya back yard fam u ant fucking hard your meltin on me like lard bruv count to 3 then come back to me then spit it in 3 then tell me that ur at the top of a tree bruv stop fucking aroudn your in the wrong town make one bad move ur be under the ground my bois make me proud takin dwn a chump like cus people like u an t got the slightis clue fuck u and your bois to bruv u chat wet like winnie the pohhh dont go cry ur eyes out cus im about u beter wach over your shoulder cus bruv wen i c u its over liek a 4 leaf clover 1 shot 2 shot 3 shot naw ur on the spot 123456 i got all the muther fucking tricks so suck your own dick u lil prick naw im ganan leave u to tap back wid ur grap

keep voting peps

[messenger]

okay im gone touch a rhyme frenzy
u pretend to be the end of me my friend u see
im sicker than ur average
flow grows quicker than ur average
slicker than ur average, ur bitch she gone have this,
i quess im spittting in ur face
ask ur bitch how my seamen gonna taste
i tried to go easy on ya,
sleezy of ya to touch this,
is if a bitch gonna touch this
so what this , fisty cuffs or u gone spit rough bitch,
why does a kid step to men
why does a bitch try to pretend,
welcome my friend to the valley of giants
we aint violent we just shut u up and hear silence,
if u planing to hit back
then atleast make ur bitch trap hit back wit something worth hitting back,

[messenger]

keep voting peeps. lol like that spit u just layed is gonna help in any way, sit down shut up. u aint even got a vote. and this battles over kid. i droped that little spit pisst up last night and its still better than anything u have ever created,

This post has been edited by messenger: 25 November 2009 - 12:31 AM

[DudeAsInCool]

I think this one goes to Daniels, which makes it a tie.

[Clinton CASH]

DudeAsInCool, on Nov 25 2009, 03:19 AM, said:

I think this one goes to Daniels, which makes it a tie.

My vote is for messenger. I mean both MC's lyrics speak for themself. And my honest opinion daniels is whack as an MC. He has no structure, he's confusing and his rhymes are can I say elementary. Just being honest. Peace

[DudeAsInCool]

Any more voters?

[messenger]

let me roll the rizla paper,
we straight thugs, deliver haters
to the same faker school they uset too,
whos schooled, well u fool,
let me introduce u too my new tool,
rhyming is where we from,
fuck griming we strong,
we belong to where those bad dreams come from,
u want some well u got it,
we abolish and demolsish the disshonest,
im from the fucking school of we dont give a fuck,
middle fingers up,
ive got a bullet with daniels carved into it so listen up,
u spitting shit
a little bitch
ur spiting bit
out of lirics from other shit
but it still isnt worthy
u dont deserve me
its out now dont worry
hurry messengers figured it out now worry
i aint fucking worried bout this weak spitten
u pre written
ill keep giving u free edjucation
not too edjucate but too keep u hating
take it in , shit scribble this down
u in the presence of the riddler now,
try and figure it out,
true rapping true talent
but u acting yes u havent,

[messenger]

fuck the voting if u as a emcee or lyricist cant see or acept uve lost ur indenial, come on here and laying bars over other peoples battles aint on, ur shit and ive prooved it, now shut up, case closed over,

[daniels]

it ant over soo shup bruv its a ite atm and naw its my turn ganna ave to waite tho mug ur only getin on a hype cus ur ganna loose you