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YungPhantom_23

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About YungPhantom_23

  • Birthday 02/23/1993

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  • Favorite Music Type
    Rap,R&B
  • Favorite Artist
    T.I., lil wayne, tupac, the game

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  • Location
    ATLANTA
  • Gender
    Male

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  1. yo words of advise...if your gonna call it a rap...atleast make it rhyme
  2. yo man i kno u aint tryna diss me....ill put an R.I.P sign hangin of yo bitch ass and ya wack rhymes....i aint got the time to mess wit yo lame shit...when u can get real then u might have a chance and heres some advise on ya raps....QUIT BITCH CUZ HEY U SUCK NEED TO GO AFTER YOUR REAL DREAM AND GO FUCK THE GAY PARADE>>>>IF U WANNA SAY I SUCK THEN RETHNK....LISTEN TO THE TACKS 1ST BICTH....IM HOT UP IN THE ATL....IM BOUT TO GET SIGNED WIT GRAND HUSTLE STUDIOS....THATS T.I'S INDUSTRY....SO ILL CALL U OUT ON TH BIG SCREEN . BITCH...PEACE
  3. my rhymes are so sick someone hand me the nyquil/ i let my bitch steal yo bitch faster than a dyke will/ keep talkin shit and i will stich you like a night quilt/ my thuderous flow kills like lightning strike will/ and im the chosen one im gods gift to earth/ i've had hataz tryna get me since my mom gave birth/ but they cant get me cuz im ungetable/ and i'll always be around cuz im unforgetable/ ima be talked about for genarations to come/ i'll have more followers than a nation son/ ima new style with amazing flow/ hit you so hard you won't know which way to go btw i made officially made ungetable a word...lol...send feedbsck rate it on a scale of 1 to 10 peace out!!!! Official ZYoung Phantom Music Space
  4. i aint tyrna critisize and shyt but you aint got no type of flow whatsoever...just try to make the words atleast rhyme together and if you ever need help or shyt just hit me up....listen to a couple of my tracks and tell me what you think about them....www.myspace.com/riseofthephantom1234...no hard feelings just helpful words...take it to consideration and let it go to waste on the real
  5. oh damn i ain even notice...that was supposed to say sorrow but i just typed it wrong...thats my fault...but thans anyways
  6. yo i aint understand none of that neither
  7. yo this shit is nice...kepp at it...yo u got a music myspace...if so hit me up...www.myspace.com/riseofthephantom1234
  8. born in 93 the first year of my life/ aint never had a mother to be there by my side/ it was a tragedy the day that my grandma died/ i couldnt except the fact that she was out of my life/ and i will never forget the day they sent my dad away/ its tearin up my family im watchin it fade away/ so i stayed by my bed everynight and prayed/ that my family will reunite one day/ i got hataz in my life tryna make me quit/ they hatin on my talents cuz they aint worth shit/ just take me away from the life i live/ cuz ive lost so much and now have nuthin to give/ take me away to a place where theres no tomorrow/ where theres no harm done and i feel no sorry/ cuz the life that i live keeps me so stressed out/ i been on the wrong path so show me the right route/
  9. yea cuzzo thats watz im talkin bout...kepp at it and alwayz go strong
  10. ight thnx DUDE atleast someone knows what true talent is
  11. im not takin shit like that from a dumbass who cant spell...a simple word...hahaha u funny man
  12. first off that didnt make sense...and secondly howu tryna help someone when u tellin them they garbage and need to quit
  13. so u wanna call my shit wack...HAVE U SEEN THIS SHIT....ITS WACK AS FUCK MAN...AND U TELL ME IM GARBAGE...MAN AFTER THIS I DNT REALLY GIVE A FUCK WHAT U THINK ABOUT MY SHIT CUZ THIS JUST PROVES IM BETTA THAN YO ASS....PEACE OUT GARBAGE MAN
  14. man fuck u cracka i know u aint tryna help nobody out so fuck that shit...and santa did get me somethin...it was ya moms and i joined her in bed...tell her i said thnxs 4 tha good time and ill see on new yrs..hahaha
  15. and the second to last line was supposed to say u aint got no type of talents my shit is betta then what u make
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